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ORANGE JUICE 

Give reasons:
Aluminum tin : light and easy to put in the bag , easy to open , recycle , make a pencil holder
300ml. : enough for me RM1.30 : reasonable, affordable, have enough money in my purse/wallet to buy two tins.
Fresh orange and sugar : refreshing drink,
Favourite flavour , orange contains vitamin C – good for health

 Sample answer:

 I would choose orange juice because it is my favourite drink. It contains vitamin C so, it is good for health. It is a nutritious and refreshing drink. 300ml is just enough for me to quench my thirst. The price is RM1.30 which is reasonable and affordable. I can use my pocket money to buy it. It is packed in aluminium tin which is light and easy to take to picnics or schools. It is very easy to open and it could be recycled. I can use the empty can as a pencil holder. Definitely, I have made the best choice.